I forgot how much I enjoy remixing poems. Here's the restructured ode from my Kevin Young interaction. This may inspire more remixes later. Ode To The Alligator In Pirate Soup (Remixed For Stew)
Adam Stone You Silurian You reptile walking out out of forgettable Winner of the battle of bay leaves Brown sugar toothed Sriracha bleeding off your dependable I feed you hotdogs and open The South in your Florida (that flaccid peninsula) Pull you out of freezers stacked with common beasts You are the missing in my job interview a roadside attraction a religion for tourist season You panic bagged in perfect accent missing common peppered waterpark of qualifications You are thirteen courses of refusing Crossing the street to exotic Fancy surprising in a caged moat of oyster sauce Never frozen disrespectfully or fried joke I'm sorry I forgot you bagged you in recipes with lamb and sausages I couldn't stop inventing stupider reasons to split you from my kitchen
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April Penn
8/21/2016 12:12:55 am
How do you mix it up this way? Do you use a particular approach or is it something you can't explain?
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Adam
8/26/2016 01:52:46 pm
I don't have a specific approach for doing remixes. I try and come up with a message that's at least slightly different from the original, and I just pull words and phrases from the original text until I like the new poem.
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