I've been spending the last couple of months working on a project called I Just Want Every Teacher To Live but all of the poems keep ending up sounding like other poems I've written. Recently, Catherine Weiss has posted about a form they invented called The Rex. Their description of the form is as follows: stanza 1: factoid from history or science, etc stanza 2: personal commentary on the factoid stanza 3: a digression stanza 4: a reckoning stanza 5: a repetition of stanza #2 with new meaning & context I've rewritten what is likely the first poem of the manuscript to be a Rex. I might end up writing more of them in the future. Thanks, Catherine. Appreciation 1. The shadow blister effect is a visual phenomenon
in which a shadow bulges as it approaches another shadow It takes place when two objects are at different distances from the light source The object nearest the light source begins blocking the light from the more distant object so that it appears to reach out and pull the other object’s shadow into it 2. Mrs taylor taught every aspect of school to our kindergarten class Reading Math Art Music Gym Storytime Recess Everything I remember only three things about her besides her appearance She owned a player piano that she used when hosting singalong field trips to her house She hastily built a platform out of chair legs and wooden pallets the day roaches invaded our school during morning session And once a week During naptime she would select one child to pose for a silhouette drawing Where she would shine a light on your profile And trace the shadow She would hold on to it for a week Adding details from memory Your eyes Your smile The shadow of your sundial nose The further from the moment she turned the light off The more your silhouette resembled your face 3.What do you say she asked After she turned off the light? It looks good I reply No What do you say? I am staring at the lightbulb as it grows dark I like it She sighs Close Thank you I smile You’re welcome She stares at my face Thank you I smile You’re welcome? She sighs Thank You I smile Thank You? She smiles You’re welcome 4. Thank you became a mantra to every teacher Every friend Every relative Thank you Thank you Mrs taylor says I should say Thank you Thank you mrs taylor I am a player piano of appreciation Don’t ever again want to feel like i haven’t shown proper thank you Tell me how i can thank someone properly Everyone does so much for me Even when i don’t know how to ask Thank you Thank you every mrs taylor for trying to make me look more like i felt inside when i was still a child For being patient with my bewilderment at what people wanted from me When all i wanted was everyone to be happy with me Thank you 5. Mrs taylor taught every aspect of school to our kindergarten class Reading Math Art Music Gym Storytime Recess Everything Once a week During naptime she would select one child to pose for a silhouette drawing Where she would shine a light on your profile And trace the shadow She would hold on to it for a week Adding details from memory Your eyes Your smile The shadow of your sundial nose The further from the moment she turned the light off The more your silhouette resembled your face
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