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Pulling The Punctuation And Narration Out Once The Broth Has The Right Flavor

8/19/2016

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I forgot how much I enjoy remixing poems. Here's the restructured ode from my Kevin Young interaction. This may inspire more remixes later.

Ode To The Alligator In Pirate Soup (Remixed For Stew)
Adam Stone


You Silurian
You reptile walking out out of forgettable
Winner of the battle of bay leaves
Brown sugar toothed
Sriracha bleeding off your dependable

I feed you hotdogs and
  open The South in your Florida
                                     (that flaccid peninsula)
Pull you out of freezers
stacked with common beasts

You are the missing in my job interview
               a roadside attraction
               a religion for tourist season

You panic bagged in perfect accent
        missing common
        peppered waterpark of qualifications

You are thirteen courses of refusing
                Crossing the street to exotic
                Fancy surprising in a caged moat of oyster sauce

                Never frozen disrespectfully or fried joke

I'm sorry I forgot you
                     bagged you in recipes with lamb and sausages

I couldn't stop inventing stupider reasons to

split you from my kitchen
2 Comments
April Penn
8/21/2016 12:12:55 am

How do you mix it up this way? Do you use a particular approach or is it something you can't explain?

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Adam
8/26/2016 01:52:46 pm

I don't have a specific approach for doing remixes. I try and come up with a message that's at least slightly different from the original, and I just pull words and phrases from the original text until I like the new poem.

I don't usually use all the words from the original, and sometimes I add text from another poem to have more options. I didn't with this one. If I had added words from your poem, for example, I'd have called it (The April Penn Transcendence Mix) or something similar.

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